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I usually get up at 6:45 am After I get up, I go to the bathroom where I wash my hands and face, then brush and dress.
After leaving the bathroom I go to make myself breakfast and bring it to my room. When I eat I bring the dishes back to the kitchen and go back to the bathroom to brush my teeth.
I go back to my room and make the bed, then sit at the computer and start my lessons. After my lessons I do my homework, listen to music or read books.
At around 4 p.m. I go to my grandparents and play with the dog, when I come back I help prepare dinner, and when I eat I clean and go bathing. Then I watch a movie with my parents.
or I go to my room to watch movies on my computer and then go to sleep.



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Adam

I usually get up at 6:45 am. After that I get up, I go to the bathroom where I wash my hands and face, then brush my hair and dress myself.

After leaving the bathroom I go to make myself breakfast and bring it to my room. When I eat. When I finish I bring the dishes back to the kitchen and go back to the bathroom to brush my teeth.

I go back to my room and make the bed, then I sit in front of the computer and start my lessons. After that I do my homework, listen to music or read books.

At around 4 p.m. I visit my grandparents and play with their dog, when I come back I help prepare dinner, and when I eat I clean and go bathing. Then I watch a movie with my parents  or I go to my room to watch movies on my computer and then go to sleep.

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