DAJE NAJ I WSZYSTKIE PUNTY czy mógłby mi ktos sprawdzić czy nie ma tu błędów a jak są to powiedzcie gdzie ;))

Last month, I went to Los Angeles with my friends. First we went to disneyland and bought delicious strawberry ice cream.
It was so hot that the ice cream melted in a minute. I took a selfie with my friends in front of the Ferris wheel!

Then we went to the house of fear. This place was really scary! I almost cried out, but luckily my friends were with me. Even though I almost cried out, it was still very fun.

After that, we went to the beaches. Me and my friend were sunbathing and the rest went swimming.

We came home at night. We were very happy!