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When I was coming home from school I saw how woman on zebra crossing a car passed. It was dark in the field. When I saw the accident I stood with my mouth open. I couldn't move. There was blood everywhere. The driver helped the woman.



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When I was going home from school, I saw how a woman were crossing a traffic when the car passed. It was dark on the field. When I saw the accident I was standing there with my mouth wide open. I couldn't move. There was blood everywhere. The driver helped the woman.