Czy ten email jest napisany przeze mnie poprawnie?

3. Kuzynka wraz z jej rodzicami zapraszają cie na weekend w Londynie. Odpisz na list, w którym:
– podziękujesz i zaakceptujesz zaproszenie,
– napiszesz, że miałeś/miałaś inne plany, ale je zmienisz,
– zapytasz o szczegóły wizyty.


Hi Kylie,
I’m writting to thank you for inviting me to London with your family this week. I totally accept your invite.
First I was going to visit my aunt and uncle in this time,but I change my plans and I’m going with you.
Also,I want to ask you for a few information about this trip.What time we arrive and what are we going to visit? Schould I take a swimming costume or something? Let me know.
I can’t wait to see you!
XYZ



Odpowiedź :

Dfw

Odpowiedź:

Cześć CzarnyKsiężyc,

masz ładnie napisany email :)

w paru miejscach zmieniłabym ciutkę...

Hi Kylie,

I’m writing to thank you for inviting me to London to spend this weekend with your family. I totally accept your invite!

To be honest, I was going to visit my aunt and uncle at this time, but with your kind invite, I am changing my plans and I’m going with you!

Also, I want to ask you for some information about this trip.  At what time should I plan my arrival? Are we going to do any sightseeing? Should I take any special clothes (swimming costume or something else)?

Let me know.  I can’t wait to see you!

XYZ

Wyjaśnienie:

i jak inna osoba dodała w drugiej odpowiedzi, zamiast swimming costume może być swimming suit / swimsuit / swimwear / bathing suit... co tam sobie dodasz :)