Czy to jest poprawnie napisane?DAJE NAJ

My room is not very big. I like to spend my free time in it. The walls in my room are white. On the left side there is a bed. There is also a window and a desk. There is a computer and books on the desk. I have two plants in my room. There's a carpet on the floor. There is a large wardrobe in my room. I really like my room. I spend a lot of my free time there



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Pierwsze zdania popraw Mój pokój jest bardzo mały

My room is very small

Mój pokój nie jest duży (tak napisałaś) jest trochę niestylistyczne

I reszta Ok.

My room isn’t very big (mój pokój nie jest zbyt duży - moim zdaniem dobrze) but I like to spend there my free time. On the left side of the room there’s a window with a nice view. There’s also my bed and a desk with a computer and books on it. I have two plants in my room. There’s a carpet on the floor and a large wardrobe in the corner. I really like my room. It’s my safe place where I can read books or play games on my computer.

Możesz się zainspirować :) albo zostawić tak jak napisałeś/aś :)