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In my opinion, students shouldn't be paid to go to school. I believe that education is an important part of everyone's life and should be considered an investment in the future. I believe that rewarding students for going to school can affect their motivation and encourage them to learn better.,However, paying students to go to school can have negative effects. It can cause students to view school as a place to make money, instead of a place where they can learn and grow. It can also make students more focused on making money than learning.
Students should be encouraged to participate in school by creating the right conditions, such support from teachers and parents, and opportunities to participate in interesting extracurricular activities. I believe that paying students to go to school can have a negative impact on their motivation and perception of education