Nie proszę o pomoc w zadaniu, tylko o sprawdzenie pracy.

Jestem w 1 kl lo, na poziomie rozszerzonym. Czy ta praca jest wystarczająca i nie ma błędów, czy jednak słownictwo jest za proste, a czasy zle użyte?

I have never seen a celebrity, but since I was a child I've dreamt about it. They were my inspiration because I wanted to became famous. If I had a chance to meet my favorite one, which is Harry Styles I would ask him a lot of things. I'd like to ask him if he's feeling comfortable with being famous and what inspires him when he is writing songs. Also I'd really like to ask him if he's proud of himself, and what advice would he give to someone who would also like to have a singing career.